Tuesday, September 29, 2009

The Return of Bad Jacob

The Return of Bad Jacob by LeeLeeXtreme

Twilight FanFic, Jacob/Bella/Edward, Rated M, BPOV, LEMONS, OOC

Well, I asked for it! And LeeLeeXtreme most definitely delivered! Hehe. I wanted a Jacob/Bella fan fic, but none I'd read were worth recommending, until I found this one. Can we say smut? Come one, everyone say it with me. SMUT. So many Lemons in this one that you should have to show an ID to view it! It's soo good though and its definitely for Team Jacob.

This story takes place during Eclipse, right before the fight with the newborns. LeeLeeXtreme did a fantastic job at putting her own twist to it. She stuck with the time line, but didn't rewrite the book. She quickly skimmed passed Stephenie Meyer's parts and added her own, which was fantastic. The whole things focuses on Bella's relationship with Jacob and how she must choose between the Jacob and Edward. But it's definitely not the PG!

How does Edward handle it? What does Jacob do to try to win Bella over? Who does Bella choose?

I can't even give you a piece of the story. LOL. Just go read it(if you are 18!), its only 7 chapters.

Friday, September 25, 2009

Creature of Habit



Creature of Habit by EzRocksAngel

Twilight Fan Fic, Edward and Bella, Rated M, AU, Supernatural, Lemons, BPOV and EPOV

WOW! I just finished reading this completed story and I must say...WOW. I was so into this story, it's not even funny. Props definitely got to Angel.

Bella is just finishing up college and is preparing to lose her internship, when her boss recommends her as a personal assistant to the CEO of a large company, Edward Cullen. Edward is completely OCD and rude, and pretty much treats Bella like crap until she finally quits.

While out with her friend Angela, Bella comes face to face with Victoria. Victoria tries to take Bella back to James, but Edward interferes. From then on, Edward dedicates himself to protecting Bella, even when Bella doesn't know it.

What happens when Bella finds out what Edward really is? Will he ever open up to her? James is building an army of newborns, can Edward and Co. stop him?

The whole gang is in this one...even a tiny bit of the wolf pack, although for Team Jacob fans, isn't entirely satisfying. The story is truly great though. I love the time Angel took with this to keep me guessing. Nothing is rushed, and it all falls together perfectly and the ending is soooooo awesome!

A little piece of the story:

Mr. Cullen was standing at the bottom of the steps and I noticed his hands were full of trash and behind him I could see a tall, lanky man carrying an arm load of what appeared to be parts of a chair. Mr. Cullen wore the normal, pained grimace on his face that I’d come to expect when he saw me.
We stood for a moment in silence while his eyes traveled down my body, taking in his t-shirt. I held my breath for a moment waiting to see what he would say. The absurdity of my behavior was dawning on me.
My boss was completely neurotic and anal retentive and I was standing in front of him in his shirt.
His shirt that I had all but destroyed.
And I was currently wearing it in an act of defiance.
The fact that he was overwhelmingly gorgeous when he was mad only made the situation worse.
Or better? I had no idea. I lost all sense of rationality when he looked at me.

Monday, September 14, 2009

Just One of The Guys


Just One of The Guys by Sorceresscircle
Twilight Fan Fic, Rated M, Bella and Edward, Various POV, All Human, Lemons

Oooh how I love this story! It actually kind of reminds me of Wide Awake, which might be why I like it so much. There is a totally different story, but something that happened in Bella's past leaves close to the same aftermath as Wide Awake.

Bella and Jasper are room mates and best friends, and if it weren't for Jasper, Bella would probably have gone insane. They've known each other forever and its Jasper who makes Bella feel safe and holds her when she needs someone, and Jasper doesn't take his job lightly. When Jasper meets Alice and falls head over heals for her, Bella befriends Alice. Bella never kept many girl friends and it surprised both Jasper and Bella that she liked Alice so much.


Alice eventually talks her into going to the movies with her, her brother and Jasper. Bella is skeptical until Alice insists that her brother doesn't date and that they didn't even have to sit by each other. But when Bella lays her eyes on Edward, she starts to rethink her non dating rule. As does Edward when he first sees Bella.


Will Edward and Bell be able to overcome their fear of hurt? How does Bella finally let her wall down enough to let Edward in? How will Edward handle finding out exactly what has Bella so fearful? Will Jasper be able to step aside and let Bella live her own life?


As always, my review does not do this story justice! Just read and it and you'll love it!


A little piece of the story:


I went into the kitchen to wait, grabbing a beer and sitting on the counter with my head hanging down. I knew better than to try to wake her or to go in too early. Past experience and a few scars from scratches had taught me that much.

I blinked back tears when I heard the whimpering start. It grew louder, and I hopped down off the counter, beer forgotten, as I heard the screaming. Steeling myself, I walked down the short hallway to her room, opening the door to see her curled into a ball on the bed, sheets tangled, hands fisted into her hair with her eyes clenched shut. The glaring light from the overhead and two lamps cast her agonized face in excruciating detail.

I approached the bed slowly, speaking in a soothing voice loud enough to be heard. “Bella, sweetheart, it’s okay…you’re okay. He’s gone, Bella…he can’t hurt you again. I’m here…” I continued to try to calm her as I lowered myself onto the bed, pulling her into my arms. Slowly, so agonizingly slowly, she began to relax, her screams subsiding to sobs and then whimpers. I stroked her hair, whispering to her when the screaming stopped.