
The Red Line by WinndSinger
Twilight Fan Fic, Rated M, Edward & Bella, EPOV & BPOV, OOC, LEMONS!, All Human
This is unlike any other fan fic that I've read. It's a great story about Edward and Bella from a completely different world than I would have ever imagined.
Bella is in school studying to be a psychiatrist and she needs to find an interesting subject to do a paper on. For some reason, she chooses to go to a strip club called Fire to find her subject. When she sees Edward in a cage dressed as a Vampire, she immediately decides that that's who she wants to study. She runs the idea by him and she is so entranced with him that she agrees to pay $20,000 to own him for two weeks.
Edward is a whore. Something very bad happened to Edward and he is stuck being a slave, a prostitute, a piece of meat. He agrees to do Bella's study. They come to an arrangement that she gets to have her therapy sessions if he gets to have his sexual sessions. Bella is pretty much a virgin and Edward wants to teach her all he knows.
Bella finds that Edward has a very hard time acting normal. He is constantly in character as the male whore and she doesn't want that. She's very gentle with him, which he is not use to, and they end up growing feelings for each other. But can Edward leave his lifestyle? He is owned by Victoria who paid his debt and she has threatened Bella once before. Will Bella let him go? Can she help him? What does Bella find out about the reasons Edward is the way he is? Can Edward actually change?
Rosalie, Alice, Emmett and Jasper are in this one, too but not very much. Emmett is Edward's best friend and helps him out tremendously. Rosalie and Alice pull together to help Bella try to figure out a way to get Edward away from Victoria. Great story, folks. Happy Reading!
A little piece of the story:
“Bella?” I asked, not hungry anymore, “I want you to promise me just one thing, okay? Don’t get mad.” “Sure.” She smiled back at me, pleasantly.
“Please don’t fall in love with me.” I tried not to plead as I looked into those amazing eyes of hers, “Promise me that, please.”
She looked at me with this strange look that I couldn’t read.
She huffed, “I’m not in love with you, Edward. I just wanted you to know what I think of you. All that I said is true. I told you I’m your friend. ”
I breathed a sigh of relief and grinned, “Good. I mean, I thank you for all those things you said. I appreciate all of that. But it wouldn’t be good for you…to start to have…those feelings for me. Don’t misunderstand. I meant all the things I said to you, too. I do want you and I can’t wait to experience all the things you want. And I do love belonging to you, like I said.”
“I know, Edward.” She smiled, looking fine, “I love having you.”
This fic had me hooked too when I read it. I was amazed at how de-humanized Edward convinced himself he was. So un-worthy. And I loved How Bella was able to coax the real man out of him. I was sad to see this fic over, but very glad for the ending of it too. I wouldn't mind reading a sequel to this fic.
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Hey Crystal! I absolutely loved the ending to this story... I had tears in my eyes. I would like to see a sequel also! I'd love to see more about Edward growing and Doctor Bella adjusting to life with Katie. Maybe would should beg the author? LOL
ReplyDeleteI am so glad you put this fan fic on your blog! I was hooked and read it in like 2 days. This has to be one of my favorite stories. I wish the author would have went on a little further to talk about life with Katie...
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