Emancipation Proclamation

Emancipation Proclamation by kharizzmatik

Reviewed by Presty

Twilight, Rated M, Bella/Edward, AU-H, OOC, Lemons

I most certainly love this story because this is very different from all the normal love stories. It has a little bit of the normal world and also not to mention the underworld mafia.

Its starts off with Bella as an abused slave who is eventually bought by the Cullens, where sparks fly. Between this lovely romantic story taking place Carslile is also fishing out secrets which is yet to come out and when it comes its a nuclear time bomb waiting to go off. On the whole, its a story of romance suspense hurt and all the emotions one can possibly think of and more. It contains a lot of adult matters which include sex drugs and violence so people who are very sacred at heart are strictly recommended not to read it and miss it. This story is still in progress and yet to be completed. Currently 65 chapters have been written and has received and astonishing number of 23,394 reviews, hence making it one of the stories to receive the most review when in still progressive state. Read it. Love it. Remember it. ;)

A little piece of the story:

I was shocked and confused at first before the anger set in. I was standing in front of a girl, soaked with fucking orange juice, and all I could do was gape at her. Could I be any more fucking stupid?I could barely make her out across the room because it was so dark, but her eyes were clear as day. They were wide and expressive; she looked like a deer caught in some headlights. I finally snapped out of it and made a move to clean up the orange juice but evidently the girl was trained to do that shit, because she practically bumrushed me to clean it up herself. I head butted her and winced, as it hurt like hell. And in true Edward Cullen fashion, my natural response to the pain is to lash out.Evidently I scared her because she refused to make eye contact with me and she was trembling. I reached out and grabbed her wrist to stop her from fucking cleaning up, as she was being ridiculous and sketchy and I didn’t like it. It felt like she shocked me when I grabbed her, like a small jolt of static electricity coursed through me. She finally looked up at me and when her eyes met mine I was completely stunned.Her cheeks were red and chapped from the sun, a big ass bruise on the side of her face that looked like it came from someone’s hand. Her eyes were full of fear, a tear running down her cheek. She was troubled and frightened, that much was clear. She’d had it rough. And she was young, oh so fucking young. She couldn’t have been any older than me, as her face was still rounded slightly from youth. There was still that innocence in her face, despite the abuse and wariness that was evident.


Admin note: Presty is the newest writer to join forces with me on this blog. This is her first review and I don't know about you, but I am dying to read this story. Great Job, Presty. I look forward to more stories from you.


Edit: Author has moved story to her blog. It can still be found on fanfiction.net, but she will update from her blog, now. Thanks for the heads up, Presty. You can read EP here.


Edit Again: This story has been published. The characters have changed along with the title. Sempre (Forever) can be found on Amazon.